Tanka
(without syllable count)
last night
insomnia dead
slept all night
wake up at dawn
and plan to travel
(with syllable count)
to see the sibling
in a hundred somber years
I try to look good
alas, the old age doesn't allow me
why care? Just be as I am
©Byung A. Fallgren
Beautiful tanka
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Two good ones
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Thank you, Derrick
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Thanks so much.
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💐
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True enough…just be as you are.
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