Grand Teton, overdone praise or not
From the pathway, you weren't
as grand as I thought you would be
like some twisted opinion of truth.
Looking back, your peaks show
the different side of you:
hidden valley in the dark shadow;
seems to harbor the grandeur;
the narrow, steep ridge
twisted and crawls up toward the top, with
young man's ardent ambition; persists
to uncover the unseen;
the reason for cry in the world of darkness,
with endless dream of king;
wish to turn around to see the whole,
with a fresh eye, to meet you, real you.
©Byung A. Fallgren
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A fine metaphor
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Many thanks, Derrick
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I can adapt my on views with yours. Nicely written with many Metaphoric truths.
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Thanks so much.
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